Haiku 004
you will never know
how much you miss a person
until they are gone
how much you miss a person
until they are gone
posted by Mr. Youngs at 11:36 AM
Friday, July 08, 2005
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4 Comments:
You haiku quite well
With meanings richly stated
Point is taken
Missing someone hurts
Loving them is worth the pain
Let LOVE remember
Hey mom, you are missing a syllable in your last line, Natalie pointed that out to me.
Thanks hon....I wasn't pointing it out like, "Ha, Ha, your mom made a mistake or anything." I pointed it out cause I am new to the haiku thing and I thought maybe that the five syllables at the end was maybe not necessary. It sounds better with four, in my opinion, but a haiku is a haiku, so it must be five, I guess.
Just wanted to clear that up.
=)
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